Write lyrics for the second verse of the song

진행 현황: Closed
상금: $25
응모작 접수(건수): 26
수상자: mikeparker09

Winner

콘테스트 개요

Here's a song my band is working on:

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1qKm72z0m39cvvTRQC0qrOl-Hw34nskrK

Your task is to write the lyrics for the second verse. Right now I'm singing the first verse twice.

Try to match the vocals part, but not 100% precisely - it's even interesting when the first and the second verses don't have identical form.

Here are the lyrics:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HAPTmninVhcV0xHgcHLpSsjsfjlGrvo67IDFkemh6J4/

The song is about respecting and defending boundaries. The first verse is about my ex-employer who tried to push me as a freelancer and pay me less by the hour than I asked for (here at freelancer by the way :)

So the first verse is about money, but the second verse doesn't have to be. You can describe any situation when someone's pushing it and you're telling them to back off. Instead of "you say I charge too much" in the second chorus you could say "you say I want too much" so it makes sense if your lyrics aren't about money. You'll have to replace "low on cash" with something appropriate, too. Or, you can stick to the money subject and develop in some other way - then you can keep the lyrics of the second chorus unchanged.

Eventually I'll post the final result on my channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/MichaelRybak

This contest is not a one time thing: I'm looking for long term partners, so it's your chance to show off your skills, get more orders from me in the future, and get your work featured in videos like this one: https://www.youtube.com/watch?&v=h2SvcKL9riw

Looking forward to your work!

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mikeparker09 South Africa

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sashsen United Kingdom

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ayushpandya India

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emyjimenez05 United States

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samcasper7 India

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reky04032015 Philippines

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Rais2020 India

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TrevorRolls81 United States

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joshpaice1 United Kingdom

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olearya42 United States

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mvamva Brazil

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juanmanudel Argentina

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KuriaLiew Malaysia

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harrylawrence Malaysia

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SolomonMagara Kenya

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scoutmackay Mexico

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콘테스트 주최자
- 4 년 전
Thank you everyone for sharing your incredible talent. Congrats Michael!
- 4 년 전
1. mvamva
  - 4 년 전
  Once the contest is over, I'd like to compliment you for your conduct as contest holder. Well, your own background (the contest description and the lyrics can tell us) explains that you are a freelancer yourself and have empathy and respect for workers, what you have also demonstrated here.
  May your behavior be an example for others!
  - 4 년 전
2. ayushpandya
  - 4 년 전
  Congrats Michael!!
  - 4 년 전
JenniferSagaya
- 4 년 전
You want to me to serve you
No ! I cant bestow me to you
Well you want to blend me a one
Oh No ! I am a creative one

I cant be a mule or so you want me to be
I"ll be me and only me
You say you aint afford me
Oh thats better i want to be me

Chorus 2
One thing I owe you is a punch in the face
We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
what you gonna...You want to me to serve youis that you're asking for well yeah!
Dont make me repeat no more
So you know my terms,but if you insist
Ill have you read them off my fist right at your face

Be on your fence Oh yeah Be on your fence
Dont drag me to yours to serve under you
If you feel only you can offer
Im sorry I have my desires left to buffer

We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
what you gonna...
We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
what you gonna...
- 4 년 전
1. 콘테스트 주최자
  - 4 년 전
  Thanks Jennifer. Would you like to submit this as an entry? You've posted this as a comment to the contest.
  - 4 년 전
JenniferSagaya
- 4 년 전
You want to me to serve you
No ! I cant bestow me to you
Well you want to blend me a one
Oh No ! I am a creative one

I cant be a mule or so you want me to be
I"ll be me and only me
You say you aint afford me
Oh thats better i want to be me

Chorus 2
One thing I owe you is a punch in the face
is that you're asking for well yeah!
Dont make me repeat no more
So you know my terms,but if you insist
Ill have you read them off my fist right at your face

Be on your fence Oh yeah Be on your fence
Dont drag me to yours to serve under you
If you feel only you can offer
Im sorry I have my desires left to buffer

We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
what you gonna...
We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
what you gonna...
- 4 년 전
FAISAL59590
- 4 년 전
please check out my entry #2
- 4 년 전
FAISAL59590
- 4 년 전
I have included some slangs and native words to make it or appealing. Also, the tone and theme of the song are unchanged. I rewrote the second part from scratch for better rhyming that will suit the rhythm and melody of the tune of the song. Any suggestions and corrections are very appreciated. I hope, you will like my work. I am looking to working with you for long terms.
- 4 년 전
FAISAL59590
- 4 년 전
sir, i am profession poet and song witer. working on your project.
- 4 년 전