I need good opening words for my video -- 2

Hi After reviewing the details of the work and skills required. I can work efficiently and deliver it in a timely manner. Please initiate a chat so that we can discuss your project. I am happy to work with your and continue to work Best Regards Ali,

Dear Sirs, My name is Zhi Yang Lim and I am currently studying in Bachelor's Degree (Hon) in International Marketing Malaysian undergraduate student major in International Marketing by University Malaysia Sabah Labuan Internatinal Campus, been educated in Chinese, English, Cantonese and Malay for 22 years. Experience in translating jobs such as subtitling, native in Chinese, Cantonese and English, proficiency level 9 in spoken and written, successfully achieved A1 in both Chinese and English in O-Level. The opening for your video will be : “You are being watched. The government has a secret system: A machine that spies on you every hour of every day I know because I built it I designed the machine to detect acts of terror, But it sees everything Violent crimes involving ordinary people, people like you. Crimes the government considered irrelevant. They wouldn’t act, so I decided I would. But I needed a partner, someone with the skills to intervene. Hunted by the authorities, we work in secret. You’ll never find us, but victim or perpetrator, If your number’s up, we’ll find you.”

Hey i have read your description. I can do the proposed project in minmum time and money. I also have experience of doing such tasks. Kindly contact me incase you are intersted. I look forward to our collaboration.