English correction : text translation error for review

Hello I translated by myself a domain appraisal website from french to englis. but my english is poor. Quick mission: Should be less than an hour of work. Mission: review the following text, correct and rewrite bad sentences if necessary . This correction is not only about ortograph, but also about the 'way to say things' ( is there a better way to say what i mean ?). Original text: - [login to view URL] - [login to view URL] ############## START ####################### [login to view URL] domain appraisal APPRAISAL DETAILS: The appraisal of "crane-stationary.pro" domain is based on search volume and earning associated to "crane stationary". Search Volume: [login to view URL] have an international tld (pro), so our analysis is extended to several langages: crane stationary Search volume is average (15,000 visibility point) Earnings: Profitability tell if this sector is competitive. Then more a sector is competitive, the more the domain appraisal and ease of sell is increased. Earning and competition on "crane stationary" is very good. Earning and competition on "cranes stationary" is very low. Earning and competition on "crane" is exceptionnal. Other factors: The following factors have an inpact on "crane-stationary.pro" domain appraisal: Con: Extension "pro" worth less than .com Explanation : A domain name value can change drasticly depending of this tld. .com domain are the most worthy, because of their international range and popularity among industry and domainers. Other tld have penality that depend of their popularity (Ex: .net = - 50%, .pro = -90%). As tld is "pro", a 90% penality as been applyed to our domain appraisal Keep in my than penality value are subjetive and their is no standart. So the penality value can differ from one appraiser to another. Pro: Generic terms Explanation: "crane-stationary" is composed of generics words presents in our dictionnary. So if the domain name is generic and used descriptively of the content it is linked to, legal and copyright issue risk is reduced. Con: Long domain name Explanation: "crane-stationary" est un peu long a écrire, et donc un peu plus dur à retenir qu'un nom de domaine plus court. Cela affecte sa valeur. Con: Hyphen Explanation: because this domain contain hyphen, "crane-stationary" is more difficult to prononce, remember and write than [login to view URL] SHARE THIS APPRAISAL: You can share "Crane-stationary.pro" domain appraisal with the following link: CONSIDERATIONS: This appraisal is "SEO" oriented and is based on the fact that "The more it is searched, the more it has value". In order to build this appraisal, the following factors have been taken into account: search volume on "crane stationary", similar search, syntax analysis, "crane stationary" market earning, ease of sell, regional factor: This appraisal did NOT consider the following factors: brandability, existing domain content, existing domaine trafic, pagerank, domaine creation date, copyright and legal issue, future market potential, suitability for commercialization. Those factors can significatly alter our appraisal. We recommend you kindly ask domain appraisal expert on domain forum that will be pleased to confirm or update our appraisal. Ours domains appraisals are approximate and for educative purpose. APPRAISAL OVERVIEW: Search volume: 2 Earning: 4 Easy to sell: almost impossible Appraisal value between: 3 and 9$ APPRAISE NOW: Paste your domain names bellow: OTHER TLD: DOMAIN LOOKUP: Search for domain suggestion : Crane Stationary [login to view URL] Domain Appraisal made easy Get an estimate about the potential sales price of your internet domain name. 19 domains appraisals today. 103005 domains appraisals since start. GET DOMAIN APPRAISAL NOW: Paste your domain names bellow: LAST DOMAIN APPRAISALS: [login to view URL] Domain appraisal = 420,000 $ CONSIDERATION: How does [login to view URL] works ? [login to view URL] provides you domain name appraisals based by consideration of 3 mains factors: popularity, earning and syntax. [login to view URL] does consider the following factors: popularity analysis (exact, extended, similar search, empty words consideration...), Earning (competitors, sector strenght...) syntax analysis (word count, singular and plural, length, hyphens...), ease of sell (will it be easy to sell that domain ?), regional factor : Because some appraisal factor are strictly based on individual appreciation, [login to view URL] does not consider the following: marketability, existing domaine content, market activity, suitability for commercialization, [login to view URL] appraisal are based on "naked domaine", and does not consider: existing domaine traffic, pagerank, domaine creation date, Even if our domain appraisals aer generally close to end user sell price, you will have to manually consider other factors (pagerank, brandability...) to define a accurate end user sell price./p> Keep in mind that a automatic domain appraisal is a tool to assist you, and is not intended to fully replace professional domain traders appraisals. Is there limitation ? Yes, [login to view URL] : only works with generic, idn free, domain name with common tld, up to 4000 domain name per domain appraisal request. max 20 domain appraisal request a day. Learn more about domain appraisal. "domain valuation is not a science but an art" Up to 4000 domains appraisals in one shot, Fast and free automatic domain appraising service. 50% of sucess to get appraisals close to market value, Just cut&paste long domain list, without formating or cleaning. domaines compare: find the most valuable domain between many domaines, Best domain search: Search for the most valuable domain based on keyword: FROM APPRAISAL TO MARKET PRICE: The best sell price of a domain is the maximum amount of money a buyer will accept to pay for. About domaine appraisal, you must know that: their is no etablished standard on appraising domains values, giving an appraisal needs to take many objective and subjective parameters into account, automatic domaine appraisal will help you for the objective part but you will need to make a bit of research. So, when you need to define a price for a domain: Get a free domain appraisal from [login to view URL] Publish the appraisal result on domain forum and see what domainers tell you. if necessary, update your appraisal based on domain expert comments. You now should have a domain appraisal with real arguments, humanly confirmed, that you can turn into market.