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aaronlowcy
Rewrite of content
Please find attached my entry. As an experienced writer and editor, I have done my best to produce a convincing piece of writing. Key edits (changes or additions) are highlighted in yellow. (Of course, certain words, especially medical terminology and nouns like wrinkles, cultured bacteria, liposuction and hyaluronic acid cannot be altered.) I have also included a sharp tagline at the end 'Renew the radiance...' to convince customers to use it. Hope you like my work, Aaron
