Professional company Bio and story needs writing.

진행 현황: Closed
상금: $50
응모작 접수(건수): 26
수상자: GavinParish

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콘테스트 개요

We are a new company and I have just had a go at writing a bio for our website and possibly to be used in some local newspapers. I'm not a professional writer and would like help with making our bio shine.I have attached the bio, it is in Australian English, please submit all entries in Australian English. This is the first of many articles and we would like to find a winner to write for us into the future.

고용주 피드백

“Gavin was very professional and easy to deal with, I highly recommened is work.”

vanuatuboy, Australia.

공개 설명 게시판

ssethumadhavan
- 10 년 전
I think I just missed the deadline by a minute can I send the entry
- 10 년 전
ssethumadhavan
- 10 년 전
@vantuaboy could you please provide me one message that your readers should carry forward after reading this article, I am planning to submit an article hence if you can do that it would be great for both of us. Else I will take the last paragraph of your article as the one, which I have noted for reference. "Aquamarine Personalised Home Care is committed to providing the highest quality non-medical home care services and treating all clients, of all ages with dignity and respect.
- 10 년 전
ssethumadhavan
- 10 년 전
@Vanuatabosy, Could you please describe the relationship between Brian Farrel and Barry Holland. Are Brian and Barry completely un related? Could you let me know if Brian's Grand parents and Barry's father are connected.
- 10 년 전
writersquality
- 10 년 전
@vanuatuboy: Dear Sir. Please have a look at entry #28 . This is my third entry to contest. Hope this time I did it the way you asked. Please give valuable feedback.
- 10 년 전
mynk16
- 10 년 전
@vanuatuboy

Read out the Messages section of #24 . It's very important.

- Mayank
- 10 년 전
콘테스트 주최자
- 10 년 전
similar length, yes improve vocab, organised as you see best
- 10 년 전
smshah
- 10 년 전
Can you please specify exactly the requirements ?
Should the length be the same as the sample or less?
Should the vocabulary be improved? Should it be more formal or inclined towards informal language?
Should the article be organised more or the same structure be used?
- 10 년 전
vampyfree
- 10 년 전
Hello vanuatuboy, i hope you can read in image submitted..or else i will send word file. :)
- 10 년 전
writersquality
- 10 년 전
I'll submit my entry very soon.
- 10 년 전
TheGuyver2040
- 10 년 전
Vanuatuboy,

Would it be possible for you to guarantee payment?
- 10 년 전
2개 메시지 더 보기
1. 콘테스트 주최자
  - 10 년 전
  Thank you
  - 10 년 전
2. TheGuyver2040
  - 10 년 전
  Done. See entries #2 and #3 .
  - 10 년 전
Reejurekh
- 10 년 전
Can you please guarantee the contest?
- 10 년 전
1. 콘테스트 주최자
  - 10 년 전
  I just guaranteed it now, apologies I'm new to this.
  - 10 년 전
shashankroy
- 10 년 전
I can do this . Please contact me
- 10 년 전