I need a 10-point analysis with a focus upon these key professional criteria:
• Character – protagonists’ motivations need to be identified and developed from the standpoint of goals, back-story, psychology.
• Conflict – the essence of the narrative, challenging the characters, progressing through levels of tension, forcing character changes.
• Marketability – the potential for a sale, box office draw, and both domestic and foreign sales potential.
• Dialogue – realistic and distinguishable character “voice,” driven by character wants, desires, and motivations.
• Emotional Investment – strong emotional impact that keeps the reader engaged and invested into the outcome of the characters.
• Theme/Premise – avoidance of derivative storylines, a unique perspective within the genre, lack of predictability.
• Pacing – appropriate page count, scenes that propel the action, progress the plot; a balance between dialogue and action in scenes that transition logically.
• Structure/Plot – The beginning, middle, and end. Situation, complication, resolution. The use of structural devices within scenes and sequences (flashbacks/forwards, reversals, twists, time limits, etc).
• Tone – focused, consistant, and appropriate dialogue, characters, scenes, situations, and structure for the genre (comedy, drama, horror, action, etc)
• Concept – What is unique about the story? What separates it from the other films in it's genre space? What element of the story will attract an audience?
Hello
I am a professional, independent film maker, and an accomplished screenwriter. I am also and experienced author and editor. I have a thorough understanding of the principal requisites of good story, and especially of good screenplays.
I can give you a concise, itemised, in-depth analysis of your script as you require. I can offer you informed comment of substance and quality on the overall arc of the story, its structure and organisation, the use of language and dialogue, and much more.
Thank you for your consideration
Dear,
As you know, writing a script requires a high degree of creativity, innovation, and originality. Whether it's for a business video, a how-to, or an explainer video, I can deliver a highly entertaining and truly captivating script in record time.
Regards
This project sounds very exciting and to be great fit for my experience. I have two relevant degrees: BA in Professional Writing where I majoring in writing for Film and TV. I also have a BA in Creative Communications (Film & TV). I have also working providing freelance script analysis and development for TV networks and independent projects. I also part owned and ran a film production company for three years.
I am assuming that your project is referring to providing this analysis for a feature film. If for a short the cost will be considerably lower.
The majority of the time will be spent reading the work and making notes in regards to the standard ten points that you have outlined below.
The remaining time will be spent researching items not directly related to the script itself. That is, marketability and some aspects of concept. These can take time depending on the screenplay itself as it can be difficult to estimate these things for some projects.
I look forward to talking to you further about this.
I read your project, and I have exactilly what you are looking for. Because this is what I do best is to see a movie will be a big blockbuster or big flop.
Good day,
I've recently just completed a Feature Film screenplay that's taken me 8 years to develop and write. (Standard time, I'm told for the average film). I've also just received production funding for my film, and although it is only the first 10%, it was the most important 10% that will surely allow the remaining 90% to be achieved through various funders. Throughout this journey I've had encounters with every single point that you've mentioned in the Project description. Especially marketability, financial projections and approaching distributors to further secure funding. With this in mind I would like to be considered for the position.
Thank you for your time and consideration,
Fabian Medea
Hi,
I'm Abhijith. I've finished my diploma course on screenwriting and direction in India.
I'm pretty sure that I can complete your job in time with accuracy and responsibility.
Thank you.
Relevant Skills and Experience
Screen writing
Movie buff
Creative thinking
Language
I believe I would be the perfect person to help you with your analysis. I am a film student at NYU with a focus in screenwriting and have experience with both writing scripts of various genres and with script analysis.
In-depth film story analysis is one of my strongest abilities and I would love the opportunity to help you. If I can be of assistance, please feel free to contact me!
I am an experienced screenwriter, having worked on multiple indie films in the past few years. I am also an avid reader, having read over 100 screenplays. Hence, I have an eye for good plot structure, character development, pacing, good dialogue and marketability of the screenplay. Do contact me so we can discuss further details of your project